So, yeah, this page here:
I object to many inaccuracies, but most glaringly...
THIS: "Strike Witches are women with high magic potential."
AND THIS: "Called Strike Witches (sic)hiding(sic) witches who are in the military. 'Strike Witches "are talented girls aged 12-14 years, with great potential."
wrong wrong wrong wrong
Strike Witches is the Unit Designation of the 501st Joint Fighter Wing.
It is not a catch-all name for any Witch in the military.
Strike Witches is also the name of the franchise, with appropriate subtitles for stories not involving the 501st JFW
I won't critizise the broken English since it is obviously not the editors native language, but there are MANY inaccuracies within the page itself. May I submit a corrected version for approval. If so, who would I send it to for approval?